Monday, February 8, 2010

SON OF A GUN (1st draft)

THE STORY

CHAPTER 1: The Find

Ricky and Max are out for a drive searching for goods that they can bring back to their house. They find an old TV that someone is throwing away and proceed to knock on the owner's house. After no one answers the two put the TV in the back of Max's truck and bring it back to the house.

When they set it up and get settled in they find that the TV is not working. Knowing that Dan is a electrician they call him.
Dan: "I'm picking up right now, I'll be home in 30"
Dan comes home and proceeds to fix the TV. After opening up the TV the three characters discover a bag full of a mysterious and valuable material/substance. The three decide to hide the bag in the attic.

CHAPTER 2: The Kill

Ricky awakes the next morning and begins to cook up some eggs. He calls up his band mate Joel over for a jam. What Ricky does not know is that the bag belonged to Joel and he is looking to get it back. After Ricky refuses to tell Joel where the bag is they end up in a heated argument. Joel grabs an ax and proceeds to chase Ricky out of the house. The chase ends with Joel lifting the axe above Ricky, but not showing his death.

CHAPTER 3: The Fire

While Joel is looking for the bag, Dan returns to the house and receives an anonymous text message telling him to get out of the house. Sensing somebody is already in the house, Dan grabs a can of spray paint for defense. When he sees Joel he blasts him in face. blinding him. Joel blindly swings the axe, decapitating Dan. Joel then slips on the blood from Dan and falls back, the axe flies in the air and lands in Joel's head. Max returns to the house to find the bloody ax and the bodies of Joel and Dan. Max grabs the bag and sets fire to the house and exits.

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